Loranys Gellantara

This was very short and got the message across. I do think that you could make it longer.

For a first poem this isn't bad. I think that it can be edited. For example: 'Buds then leaves are on your limbs' AND 'all falls off and you turn ...

I like it! Very constructive and you put a lot of feeling into it. How I think you could have cut these two verses. I hate my life I hate ...

It definately is the 'same old story', I like the way you put it but it needs more feeling. It needs to be longer and more constructive. I like how ...

No offence but this is one of the worst poems I have ever read. It can be worded more constructively but I do like the feeling that you put into ...

This needs a bit of editing. To you, Should have a full stop not a comma. The second line should be, "be able to say the truth on day", cut ...

As much as I love dragons monkeys are hell better!

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands.

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Have you ever broken a world record with those fingernails of yours?

'I wish'

Well I have never seen a pink, red, blue, green, and orange one so I would have to say the colours that make grey. What colour is a newspaper?

cube

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Is it a science fiction?